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BOOK REVIEW: “The Moon is a Harsh Mistress” by Robert Heinlein (1966)

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It would be very hard to overstate the impact this book had on my life when I was a kid. Heinlein was, bar none, my favorite SF writer, and this was, bar non, my favorite story by him. It didn’t hurt at all that I discovered it during those lonely days of my adolescence when a kid hits that “Oh, I get it now” stage in your neurological development and his ability to amass new knowledge far outstrips his social skills. I very much identified with the character “Mike,“ consequently. And of course I had the kind of righteous indignation that only a teenager can really pull off at that period, as well. This book felt as if it had been written for me, personally, and as it happened, anyone I stumbled across who liked it invariably became a fast friend. The book shaped my dreams - continues to do so - a generation after I first read it, and I can only assume it continues to do so. It is an unquestioned classic of the genre.

It’s not a very good book, though.

Thing is: I don’t tend to re-read stuff very much. With a few exceptions (Mostly non-SF) I read something, put it on the shelf and that’s done with it. I’m blessed with a freakishly good memory, so there wasn’t much reason to, and there was sooooooooo much other stuff out there to read. Should I waste time re-reading “Night Probe” by Clive Cussler, and get nothing out of it that I didn’t already get the first time through, or should I move on to “Solaris” by Lem, with its vast, unexplored literary panoramas? Should I re-chew my cud, or amble over to the next virgin field for a new feast?

I still don’t tend to re-read much. My memory isn’t nearly as good as it used to be (Though it’s still impressive), but nowadays it’s more a bad habit than anything else. The downside, obviously, is that my first impression of a book is generally also my last impression, and my perspectives change over time while my memories don’t (Much). Thus I remember the way I felt about a book thirty years ago, but since I don’t feel the same about *anything* these days as I did way back when, even if they’re accurate, the relevance of my memories are way off. Cheeze Wiz, for instance: I used to adore Cheeze Wiz. Ate it twice a day. Can’t stand to be in a room with the stuff now, though. So: does the novel hold up in the face of my more sophis-ta-ma-kated tastes, or what? Well, no, it doesn’t. I’m getting ahead of myself, though. We’ll come back to technical problems in a bit.

Plot: This is one of those “American Revolution in Space” books, much like “The Island Worlds” or the second “Mars” book by Kim Stanley Robinson, or any number of others. It’s become something of a cliché, though as with all clichés there’s quite a bit you can do with it if you attack it just right. If Heinlein wasn’t the one to originate this cliché, he was certainly the first one to really nail it home and have a lot of success. Make no bones about it: those skillions of “Space colonies revolt against their masters” tales are all ripping this one novel off. It’s worth reading strictly for historical perspective alone, even if it’s not very good.

It’s divided into three sections: the first introduces what life is like on a moon with about three million people on it (The same number as lived in the American colonies on the eve of our revolution), explains their political impotence, shows their plucky rapscallion nature, and extrapolates their eventual plight. In essence, the moon is providing most of earth’s food, and hence depleting its resources so quickly that it won’t be able to support its own population in less than a decade. This section culminates in a revolution where the colonists overthrow the government. It’s easy and fun! “Coincidentally” this happens on July 4th, 2076. See the obvious direction the author is going with this?

The second section - weakest part of the book, and the longest one by far - involves two of the protagonists visiting earth attempting to gain legal recognition for the new Lunar Free State. Predictably this goes not at all well - if it did, you’d have a very short book.

The third section involves the moon bombing earth until the people

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As long as we're talking about Golden Age Authors...

I've been pulling my old "Sector General" novels out to get Mama Fisi interested in.

Anybody have any opinions on James White's stuff?

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All true.

SF was pretty overly-deviant there, and I think it was just because the permisiveness of the times allowed publishers to take the lid off the pot and let it boil over. It toned down again eventually. A lot of it was also evolving writing styles. As I've repeatedly said, most of the Golden Age boys couldn't write for sour apples, excepting PKD and Bradbury. And brother, so many of the Golden Age fans *hated* them for that. "He doesn't know the difference between a rocket and a space ship!"

The New Wave was about writing as an actual craft as opposed to it just being a means to get to an ending. Books from the period are generally much better written, much more readable, and they have things like "Characters" in them. The downside is, as you note, there's a whole lotta' F***in' goin' on. I can't complain too much. There's no deviance, but there's a fair amount of sex and profanity in my stories (Never anything pornographic, mind you, nor even particularly ribald), but being able to do that does free up the storytelling.

Heinlein jumped on this bandwagon ASAP, but to my mind he was never very good at it. He simply wasn't as good a writer as the new wave generation, and New Wave was *generally* not hard SF. So what was the point in Bob writing it? What was there for him to talk about?

When Niven or John Varley (Who are, in many ways, New Wave versions of Heinlein) are writing about creepy sexy stuff, it's generally in service of some larger unstated point about how technology changes morality. There's a point to it. When Heinlein did it, it was basically just a "There's nothing wrong with it, how dare you complain!" kinda' screed.

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Product of the times

You know, when Heinlein did start going off the deep end, in the 1960s, you have to consider that, most of the other writers were doing the same thing.

I remember reading science fiction short story collections from the 1960s & 1970s that were pretty deviant. If I recall correctly, these were Hugo award winning stories, that warped my young brain. Polygamy, underage, sex change, homosexuality...

Now, was it the authors leading the audience, or the authors giving the audience what they wanted/expected? I dunno. A little bit of both, I expect.

My point is that Heinlein wasn't alone in being a creepy guy. Science fiction in those days had an awful lot of sex in it.

My brother was at a science fiction convention in college, and he described a young 14 year old girl asking David Gerrold a question: "What do you think is the difference between science fiction in the 1950's and today"

His answer (to a 14 year old mind you) "Now our characters can F**k" and we can talk about it."

I'm not a big fan of David Gerrold. "The Trouble With Tribbles" seems to be so far away from his normal writing, I have to wonder who edited and reworked it?

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>>My brother and I read "Have Spacesuit Will Travel" when I was 13-14 or so. I was really blown away by it. [...]I started reading through his books in search of more. I've never had any luck.<<<

First trip is free.

>>A few years back, a friend recommended to me, his favorite book in the world, and gave me a copy: "Time Enough For Love". I tried to read it, but eventually ended up buying an audio book version to listen to on long car trips. I only made it half way through that. I kept asking the question "Why does he go into long winded justifications and genetic experiments just to make incest possible?" What possible justification could there be? You're not going to learn any science from it. What's the point?<<

I'm increasingly of the theory that Bob must have been sexually assaulted as a kid. He's got all the hallmarks. I've never heard anyone even hint such a thing, so perhaps I'm just seeing stuff in shadows that aren't there, but he was writing books about stuff so deviant that even deviants find it pretty sick. And re-reading his earlier stuff, there's an anger in his "Everone's an idiot but me" stuff that he tries to hide between rakish amiability.

>>It occurs to me that his writing is better off when he's got some constraints on him. As long as he's writing for kids, he's not allowed to wander off into sexual fantasies. I do think that some writers do better with a censor sitting over their shoulder. If you can't come out and say something one way, you're forced to come up with a more creative (and usually more funny) way of expressing yourself.<<

Agreed. The limitation is part of the form. A sixteen line haiku isn't a haiku. A 20,000 word novel isn't a novel. A vine without a trellis is just a pile of crap on the ground. Some rare authors can do without that. Not only could Heinlein *not* do without someone over his shoulder, but he actually looked down on the work of people who could. He was pretty shockingly anti-intellectual and condescending when it came to "Literature." He didn't like it.

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>>For me his last good book was 'The Moon is a Harsh Mistress' the rest seemed to spiral into exploring things that even I would think are too kinky.<<

[Thinking out loud]
"Stranger" - crap.
"Podkayne" - pretty good.
"Orphans of the Sky" - pretty good, but doesn't count since it's actually from the 40s.
"Glory Road" - crap
"Farnhams' Freehold" - never read it.
TMIAHM - as we just said, not very good.
"I Will Fear No Evil" - never read it.
"Time enough for love" - crap
"Number of the Beast" - unbelievable crap
"Friday" - crap
"Job" - wildly offensive libertarian atheist crap
"The Cat who Walks through Walls" - strong contender for 'worst science fiction book ever,' defeated only by Heinlein himself.
"To Sail Beyond the Sunset" - never read it.

So I pretty much agree.

>>Like Asimov and Clark Heinlein is one of the three greats because of one or two works and the shear volume of work they cranked out in the 50's.<<

All three were head-and-shoulders above their peers (Excepting Bradbury) as writers, but compared to non-genre writers, they weren't very good.

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My brother and I read "Have Spacesuit Will Travel" when I was 13-14 or so. I was really blown away by it. When my brother had a chance to buy an old Mercury Backup test suit, I begged him to do so, even though it was pretty much shot, unusable and way too expensive.

I've never been able to find another Heinlein book that came anywhere near close to having the right blend of plot, fun, science and engineering and adventure.

I started reading through his books in search of more.

I've never had any luck.

There are a lot of Heinlein fans out there, who will cheerfully make recommendations, but I've found them increasingly creepy. Personally, I think "Spacesuit" would benefit if the girl Peewee had been 16 instead of 11.

I think "The Moon is a Harsh Mistress" was one of the first ones that gaga Heinlein fans recommended that kind of creeped me out with the problems you note above.

A few years back, a friend recommended to me, his favorite book in the world, and gave me a copy: "Time Enough For Love". I tried to read it, but eventually ended up buying an audio book version to listen to on long car trips. I only made it half way through that. I kept asking the question "Why does he go into long winded justifications and genetic experiments just to make incest possible?" What possible justification could there be? You're not going to learn any science from it. What's the point?

I never got an answer.

I remember enjoying "Space Cadet" and "Space Ship Galileo" which were written for juveniles.

It occurs to me that his writing is better off when he's got some constraints on him. As long as he's writing for kids, he's not allowed to wander off into sexual fantasies. I do think that some writers do better with a censor sitting over their shoulder. If you can't come out and say something one way, you're forced to come up with a more creative (and usually more funny) way of expressing yourself.

If you take away all constraints on a comedian, they often lapse into obscenities and fart jokes. I guess it's the same with Heinlein.

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The three books that make most people believe Heinlein was the real deal a 'Starship Troopers', 'Stranger in a Strange Land' and ' The Moon is a Harsh Mistress' have all been adopted by different groups. 'Starship' is a favorite in the military, 'Stranger' became the handbook for the hippy generation and 'Moon' was grabbed on to by the Libertarians.

I really doubt that most non-sci fi fans have really read any of his other works. For me his last good book was 'The Moon is a Harsh Mistress' the rest seemed to spiral into exploring things that even I would think are too kinky.

Like Asimov and Clark Heinlein is one of the three greats because of one or two works and the shear volume of work they cranked out in the 50's.

All three were read by people that became the movers and shakers of the world in the 60's and 70's.

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He got better right up to the point where he got worse

His really early stuff was unreadable crap, then he moved into merely clunky crap, then brisk crap, then brisk non-crap, then he was pretty good up until around 1960 when, according to some, he had some sort of nervous breakdown, or, according to others, he simply came out of the Y.A. closet and started writing the kind of crap he always wanted. Which was (To my mind) mostly crap. According to Lensman, he had a really bad bloodclot (But not a stroke) in his brain at some point in the 70s, and was never quite the same after that. His stuff from 1980-his death was unreadable garbage. But of course the brain damage theory doesn't account for his "Incest is keen!" crap, which already started showing up in "Time enough for love" (Which is also unreadable garbage)

Of course I may only *remember* his main sequence stuff as being pretty good. TPTT and TMIAHM have shown me how faulty my memory can be. I'll have to re-read stuff.

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Yeah, but he just got *worse* as time went on. _Friday_ for example... or _The Cat Who Walked Though Walls_.

...and I had a cat named Pixel...

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This is the problem I'm facing. Following this, I read "The Past Through Tomorrow," which was my second-favorite book by the guy. It was better than TMIAHM, but it wasn't at all great, and several of the allegedly-brilliant stories - "The Man who Sold the Moon" for instance - are just flat out annoying.

Again: I cut some slack because he was just figuring out his skill set, but, man, was I ever so young as to be impressed by this? No wonder I went ga-ga for Known Space when I discovered it.

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The Moon Thing...

...It's hard to comment as I also last read this book in the Tempe High School library while I was trying to get out of doing some homework or other...

...what I do remember was that I'd rather have done the homework. This was the book that put me off Heinlein forever. To comment more, I'd have to re-read it.

I have to restrain my hatred of Heinlein at all times. Right, so you're the first one to crank out some schlock, so you, what, get extra credit for that? That makes you a great author? Really? _Have Spacesuit Will Travel_ was okay. That must be the best thing of his I've ever read.

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